Thursday, May 22, 2008

On intimacy and other ununderstandables

Intimate moments
The light touches the skin pressed,
the words unleashed...
Spewed un-edited un-filtered full of life

Most of life you live behind a shield
A spiked wall ready to bash.
Turning your friends and family to tikka
Your words unsaid metal skewers bisecting your relationships

These moments of intimacy.
Brief glimpses into my own humanity.
glances into what I think I am.

Isn't it odd.
Strange. Weird. Or at least somewhat unusual.
That all my most intimate moments are with strangers?

2 comments:

SecretHistory said...

not at all odd. there are no risks with those you will never see again. writing is like that. we do it for the one out there who may realize what we mean because we are surrounded with unknowing unthinking unfeeling familiars.

misanthropic bastard said...

Love the turn at the end. "Intimacy" as a ridiculous word for sex. Maybe a stanza about intimacy with a long-time friend or family member wouldn't be out of place between the 1st and 2nd?